ART 334


iMovie Link

iMovie Artist Statement:

The premise of this video resides in a single action. This action, whatever it might have been, becomes intensified due to the attention that is placed on it. I chose to focus on the act of holding my breath because it is a simple action, yet can be a powerful statement at the same time. In subtle ways, this video comments on such topics as control and resistance. The irony of the small bowl of water being used directly in front of the far-reaching body of Lake Michigan is another subtle, important factor.

I wanted the piece to create tension for the viewer, making them feel slightly uncomfortable about what was happening. I think the relation that viewers have with their own bodies and the one they see on the screen creates the tension I was looking for, and the longer I stay under water, the more anxious the viewer becomes about when I am going to surface up for air. 

I chose to bring the action to a full close, by including my surfacing and gasp for air. I felt it was important to the action as a whole to include its commencement. I was not interested in leaving the viewer frustrated or unsure, which would have been the result had the video only shown me underwater, never coming up. I was more interested in the viewer being curious about the action as a whole, the context, and its outlaying concepts. 

The voice overlay adds another element to the piece that correlates it to a specific set of ideas regarding the action. I chose to read from a selection of a book, The Awakening, by Kate Chopin because I wanted to intentionally direct the viewers understanding. The words are almost atmospheric, but speak directly of concepts conveyed in the action. A less specific sound, such as the waves of the lake, would not have worked to shape the meaning of the piece, but rather would have just existed within it.




Technology Lesson Plan:


Sara Weimer
Lesson: Color Theory                                 
Grade Level: High school, 9th-12th grade



Benchmark/Standard:

-ART.VA.I.HS.2 intentionally use art materials and tools when applying techniques and skills to communicate ideas.
-ART.VA.II.HS.6 Use emergent technologies and materials to create artistic products that demonstrate knowledge of context, values, and aesthetics.
-ART.VA.III.HS.2 Describe how organizational principles are used to elicit emotional responses.
-ART.VA.III.HS.1 Analyze and describe the formal characteristics of a work of art or design.



Objective:
I am going to introduce video as an art making material. By the end of the lesson I will have shown the class examples of video art from contemporary artists, and will have given a demo on how to use the video camera. Students will be expected to have taken notes. The rest of the lesson is centered on students capturing their own footage for a video piece they will be making. Students will be expected to think about video in an abstract way, rather than in a narrative or “movie” style. I will check for progress by having informal discussions with each student about ideas and methods of production.



Art Content Knowledge/ Artist/ Artmaking Strategy/ Art Activity
           
Big Idea: Self

Key Concept:
Students will explore the self through symbolic and abstract means. Students will create an atmosphere, emotion, feeling or concept that directly relates to them through an abstract action or occurrence.

Essential Question:
-How can I use video to create a feeling/emotion in a way that I could not do with other materials?
-What types of actions produce specific emotions or feelings?
-How can I manipulate the action I choose in order to create the concept I wish to explore?
-Is the action I choose visually interesting? Does it relate conceptually to my idea?


Artist:

Selected Artist: Janine Antoni
Key Artwork: Tightrope


-        Janine Antoni works in sculpture, performance and photographic mediums. Her work focuses on process and uses action in an abstract way.
-        The work is based on an idea Antoni had as a child living in the Bahamas. She wanted to walk on the edge of the sea, where it meets the sky in the distance. The work becomes both literal and figurative in the sense that the tightrope does land directly on the horizon line, yet the action is only an illusion. The connection between ideas, concept and the possibilities of video as an artmaking medium are strong in this piece.
-        Artmaking practices include learning skills, such as tightrope walking, constructing scenes and scenarios to aid in performance, building sculptural objects and using the body as a tool to make art.
-        Antonia quires knowledge in different ways depending on the specific project. If she must learn a new skill, she will. If she must learn how to use a new material, she will. Technical strategies are almost unlimited in this way.
-        Conceptual strategies come more through a personal and experiential position. Antoni explores ideas through a straightforward action, many times being very simple and ordinary. The use of her own body plays a strong role in effecting the meaning of the piece, as well as adding to the abstractness.

Art Activity: Digital Media Integration
           
Studio Activities:
-        Students will create a video that focuses on the use of an action as a metaphorical reference to an emotion, concept or idea of their choosing.
-        Students will be using video cameras provided by the school and may choose to include themselves in the footage, use models, or not include any individuals at all. Formal considerations such as lighting, framing, angles and sound must be considered and will be graded for.

-        The action must relate in some way to an emotion, concept or idea that that student chooses. During critique, the student must be able to talk about why they chose the action and idea, and be able to discuss how the two connect.

Concept Mapping:
I will first introduce students to the material we will be using for this project and go over the basic strategies and how-to’s for operating a video camera. The next step will be to show students examples of artists that work with this medium as a source of inspiration and ideas. I will chat with students individually to help promote ideas and then students will be expected to film what they need for the project. I will demonstrate how to edit the film and we will work individually to assess how each student can best present their footage to create their intended concept.



Anticipatory Set:

Resources and Materials:
-In order to get students interested in video art, I will start class by showing several examples by contemporary artists such as Ana Mendieta and Janine Antoni. This will require the use of Youtube videos.
- Other materials: Video cameras, film editing program, computers/computer lab, method of projection/viewing

Procedure/Preparation:
Day 1- Examples, demo on how to use the video cameras, students take notes, individual discussion about ideas.
Day 2 - Work day, students are able to film.
Day 3 – Demo on how to edit film, work time, individual meetings about editing.


Vocabulary:
-Framing: Properly surrounding the subject of a shot by the edges of the actual boundaries of the film. Involves camera angle, distance, and arrangement of objects and people in front of the camera.
-Camera Angle: Whether the shot is taken from behind, in front, from the side or from the top or bottom of the particular view.
-Editing: Includes the decisions, controls, sensibilities, vision and integrative capabilities of the individual editing (cutting) artist.


Assessment/ Evaluation/ Rubrics:
I will check for student understanding throughout the lesson with individual discussions about ideas and how to work with the material. Students will be evaluated on the following objectives: technical proficiency, visual interest of the action, connection of action and idea, as well as the ability of the student to articulate their ideas and decisions.

Closure:
There will be a final critique that the whole class will participate in. Students will be expected to analyze their peers’ projects, discuss the strengths and weaknesses of work, and be able to articulate their own ideas.

Example of Studio Production:
The documentation of this project will exist as a movie file or on a disc.


Worksheet of Studio Activities:
Students will be presented with the following questions and asked to write out in their sketchbooks. Notes/ answers and sketches will be checked during class.


 -How can I use video to create a feeling/emotion in a way that I could not do with other materials?
-What types of actions produce specific emotions or feelings?
-How can I manipulate the action I choose in order to create the concept I wish to explore?
-Is the action I choose visually interesting? Does it relate     conceptually to my idea?
-Where will I film? What angles will I use? What will the lighting be like?
-How will I transition scenes? How will the beginning and ending be formatted?



Excellent
Proficient
Needs Improvement
Score

Technical Proficiency
Student demonstrates a strong understanding of the medium. Video is filmed in an interesting way. Editing is seamless and not noticeable.
Student is able to use the medium in a successful way. Filming and editing are generally interesting and not distracting.
Filming does not have variation or consideration. Editing is distracting.


_____/20



Concept
The action and idea fit together and make sense. The action is abstract and creates an interesting connection to the larger concept.
The action and concept generally make sense. The connection might not be very interesting, or the relationship might be slightly confusing.
The action and idea do not make sense together. There is no consideration of how the concept will be carried out with the footage.



____/20


Discussion
Student is able to clearly articulate their ideas and decisions. They are able to explain or defend why they chose to include/not include specific elements.
Student can generally explain their ideas. They can talk about the relationship between the action and idea.
Student is not able to articulate the reason they chose the action or how it relates to an idea or emotion.


____/10





Find my Flash animation here:

listed as SaraWeimerFlash.mov
You will need to Download the video from Dropbox in order to view it.



Flash Animation Statement                                                            

       So many times, individuals get caught up in the small details of their
day-to-day lives and forget about the bigger picture. In my animation,
I have tried to address this problematic way of thinking by examining
the experience of one specific character. His thoughts are initially
focused, very narrowly, on how boring his current situation is. But as
the narrative goes on the character’s thoughts are overtaken with
images that are far beyond his immediate surroundings. Issues such as
poverty, war, and crime invade his thoughts and eventually overwhelm
him. By the end of the animation the character is stunned by how much
is happening in the world that he has not been paying attention to. He
realizes that there are more important things going on in the world
than how boring his life seems to be.
        This narrative attempts to make the audience aware of their own
self-centered thought processes. It is important to think of and care
for oneself as an individual, but it is equally as important to
maintain a larger world-view at the same time. This animation ties
into the big idea of self through the conceptual ideas of personal
reflection and evaluation. It is also linked in a formal way through
the presence of a main character. Because there is only one person in
the video, the viewer is able to relate themselves to the character.
        I kept the imagery black and white in the beginning because I wanted
the focus to be on what eventually happens inside the characters head.
The important ideas and thoughts are visually more striking because
they are surrounded by the only color used in the video. Because of
this controlled use of color, this section is able to become the focal
point of the animation as a whole. And this, in turn, allows the
viewer to more readily establish what the main concept as a whole is
supposed to be. The animation is constructed in a very loose, sketchy
format so that it stays honest and simple. I did not want to try to
make the animation seem like it was “trying” to fit any particular
type of style, such as cartoon or anime. Because the illustrations
have their own particular style, the animation does not have to
compete with any previous connotations that such styles as anime or
cartoon would have brought to the table. Because there are few
directional cues in the style, the viewer is able to establish their
own ideas about the visual and conceptual elements of the piece as a
whole.



Cat Soup

This animation has SO many concepts and themes, it is hard to articulate a specific idea all at once. Large ideas surrounded journey, consequence of human actions, life and death, and time. Issues were connected to actual events that have taken place in human history and society, but there were also many events that took place in this animation that were from a fantasy world. All the fantasy elements were metaphorical, though, and symbolized many aspects of reality. The transitions from different scenes, times, places and ideas made the film very engaging and interesting.

The entire film is composed of these dream like, ephemeral moments, that slip and slide from one idea to the next. It is almost impossible to know what exactly is happening in each scene, but each new event creates a very specific feeling. You understand if what is happening is intended to be positive or negative, scary or alright. The cartoon-like illustration of the film also adds a flare of irony when it is combined with the seriousness of the topics.

This animation is an excellent example of how endless the possibilities really are in animation. Whatever I want to create, I can - and I can do it with style and meaning too. I really enjoyed the transitions used in this film. Everything from the actual drawing style, to the conceptual aspect of reality and fantasy. The film gave me a lot of ideas for the creation of my own animation piece.

Cat Soup: Animated short film directed by Tatsuo Sato


Postcard Project


                     Repetition


    Text


    Fantasy


Statement:


Through the exploration of several contemporary artists, their art making practices, and the endless possibilities of digital media, I have created a series of three postcards.  As a group, there is an overarching theme of urbanization and its consequences. Each image uses a different approach in how it addresses the larger idea, and each style is influenced by a different artist’s way of working.
The first postcard depicts the mailbox on the front of my new home, in downtown Grand Rapids. After looking at the work of Tom Bamberger, I strategized a way to use repetition in my image in an effort to emphasize my idea. Repeating the individual behind bars makes the problem less about that person, and more about a group, or society at large. The cage, or jail cell, is a strong metaphor that relates to the confinements that living in a city can create. Individuals are trapped in the world of concrete and consumerism, and the result is not a good one for a person’s mind and spirit.
The second postcard takes a totally different approach, and actually strives to construct a fantasy world where natural and unnatural elements coexist in harmony. Sandy Skoglund attempts to create the same kind of fantasy reality in her work, through sculpture, photography, and the combination of unlikely characters and places. Her work influenced the dream-like feeling of this postcard, which I used to emphasize the fact that the world I am presenting is not a real one. This world cannot exist outside the realm of art or fantasy, and in this realization lies the critical element of this piece. The presentation of a false reality is a powerful way to have viewers evaluate the one they actually live in.
The third postcard is the most straightforward of the three, and uses the same approach as Jenny Holzer. The text I chose directly compares the natural world with the unnatural world of the city. I allowed the image to be the prominent piece of information so that the text would be a surprise, and would be more powerful once the audience took the time to find it and understand what it is saying. In this way, the critique of the unnatural world is subtle, powerful and direct.





Topic:  Creativity and Art Education                                                                                                       


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 The dictionary defines creativity as, "the ability to transcend traditional ideas, rules, patterns, relationships, or the like, and to create meaningful new ideas, forms, methods, interpretations, etc". Essentially, to take everything that is known and expected, and to turn it inside out and make something meaningful out of what you discover. 

NO BIG DEAL.

The reality is that creativity is a very hard process to define, let alone to practice. People spend years at schools and in workshops trying to cultivate a skill that others seem to have dripping from their fingertips.  It is an illusive characteristic that only seems to slither in during the late hours of the morning. Why can't my creative juices start rolling at noon rather than 4:00 a.m.? 

I have included this image of Calvin and Hobbes because I think it is a good example of how creativity seems to work for many people. It feels more like an emotion, or a mood, than it does a skill, and would seem that no amount of coaxing or effort could force creativity to work when you need it. But in reality, creativity actually is a teachable, learn-able skill. Otherwise, there would be no point in having art and music classes in public schools. We would single out the "great creators" once they came of age and produced magical pieces of work for the world to see. 

Thankfully, schools support the development of creativity in a number of ways. This is most readily apparent in visual arts and music classes, but it spreads through out every subject. Creativity can be taught by using a variety of teaching methods, such as games, visual aids, new technologies, and real life experiences. It can be practiced through the repeated use of critical thinking skills such as analysis, interpretation, asking questions, and thinking of alternative answers. Creativity can be taught by encouraging that students use materials that they are unfamiliar with, and by asking them to start projects with only a vague set of expectations. Essentially, creativity can be taught through exploration and experimentation.

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Creativity is always important. Because the world is becoming smaller, due to technologies and travel, it is now more important than ever to be able to think a little differently than the other 8 million people that are working in the same position that you are. Being able to think outside the box allows for advancement and development.  Technology can be used in a variety of ways to employ a creative atmosphere. Because it is a relatively new media, it serves as a good source for exploration for students, as many of them might not be familiar with the programs and techniques that are available to them. Even if students are already familiar with tools such as cameras, video, and computers, they might not have applied these tools towards art. Asking students to use objects that they are very familiar with in a new way, such as making a piece of art, is a great way to get them personally invested in the creative process. 
The image at the left provides an example of a Iphone app, Brushes, being used as a medium to produce sketches. The Iphone, and cell phones in general, is an object that teenagers are constantly connected to, so why not take advantage of the technology and put it to good use in the classroom, for once!











34 comments:

  1. I enjoy your ability to write without being boring :) You should write about some of your own ideas for using technology in the classroom...like what programs you hope to use and what concept the students will follow.

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  2. You know what, it's funny when you think about how insightful Calvin and Hobbes is in regards to art. Seriously, that right there is perfect for this article.

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  3. I agree with the creativity coming around 4:00 am. COOL CREATIVITY.

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  4. Your technological proficiency is really nice! Everything is seamed together really nicely, nothing sticks out like just a stark copy and paste.
    The big idea is pretty well represented in all the postcards, they all address city life in one way or another.
    The only thing I have as a critique is that I would rearrange the order of your postcards so that they reflect the order that you talk about them in your statement. (flip the second and last postcards so that the one with text is last).

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  5. The big idea in Sara's postcards is of the consequences of urbanization.

    I would say your most successful postcard is the fantasy one. I can clearly see the connection of the city to nature. There idea comes out very clearly to me, even if the situation is obviously not "real."
    The text postcard is pretty successful in regards of getting the idea across. However, the text seemed a little strange to me. It was fairly obvious to me that the text did not belong in the image originally. Personally, I would have tried to find a way to make it seem as though the text belonged in the scene. However, this does not really affect the way your message comes across.
    I would say that your least successful card, as far as getting the big idea across, was the first one. I did not get the sense of urbanization or the consequences of it without the context or discussion. However, with the explanation of the confinement and the effects of urbanization on people, this card became much more interesting to me. I was able to think about things in a whole new manner.

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  6. 1. Urbanization / In a sort of way / Mentality

    2. Urban vs. Nature

    3. Your postcards relate really well with each other. Your photographs are all very beautiful, and their understanding remains clear. I disagree with Prof. Chen about your text one, there is something nice about the text being straightforward, and legible.

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  7. Big idea= urbanization influence on people

    You used technical skills very well especially in the first and third postcards. i really enjoy the third post card and the way you have the water and side walk running parallel. this post card really makes me think about the urban aspect and it taking over nature.

    i think all of the postcards relate to each other very well. and the first post card shows the restriction of the city well, and it turned out darker and gloomy, actually they all are a little dark which helps with your big idea. i would suggest maybe in the second post card putting the words in a different spot or make them more visible,and blended into the pavement

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  8. The big idea of urbanization is portrayed very well in your three postcards. I also enjoy how all three tie together in someway that I am not sure of, maybe it's just your personal style showing through, but they all see as though they are a series meant to be together. The one that is most effective and successful to me is the last postcard. The fantastical and artificial way about this postcard draws me in for more. I like the repetition of the moon, creating fantasy out of something natural.
    Overall, I believe your postcards hold together well and portray your big idea well.

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  9. Hi Sara! I see that your images are focusing on the idea of urbanization and its consequences. I think the first image works really well to communicate your ideas about confinement, and I like the way you repeated the person to make it more about the larger society. The image with text on it is a little hard to read, and while I understand that you wanted the viewer to search for it, I think there is a lot in this image to draw my attention away from the text, which leads me to believe the text is not very important. Your fantasy image is really interesting in showing that contrast between the urban setting and the natural one that probably used to be there.

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  10. SARAAAAAA! i stopped critiquing Missy's and here I am commenting on yours now. Your fantasy card is the best to me because it is so out there. The moons and your little fox are awesome. I think that your first repetition postcard is the best way to convey your idea of being on your own and experiencing new things. Your second postcard is hard to read but most of the masks are. I like the sentence or idea that you created for it, instead of the usual grass is only greener on the other side. Good creativity! =) I also like that all of your postcards have a consistent color scheme to them, they all look like they could be displayed together. Your explanation definitely helped, because I'm not sure if I could get your point except for your first one of being conceivingly trapped. overall, good job! yayyy!

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  11. Your first postcard definitely relates to my own feelings towards urbanization. Not everyone feels the same about city life, however. It would have been interesting if you took the postcards to relate different feelings that people hold within cities. The direction you did take the postcards, though, was also interesting.
    For your first postcard, it would have been even better if the girl inside the mailbox cage was a picture of you. Since you are reflecting on your own feelings, it would have felt appropriate to relate the image more towards yourself.
    I would agree with Chen about changing the text in your second postcard. It is effective as it is, but I think it has the potential to be better, especially compared to the other two postcards.
    My favorite image was your third postcard because of its surreal contrast between the natural and man-made. The craft is awesome and creates a really thought-provoking image.
    Overall, the three images worked well together to communicate the idea of urbanization.

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  12. I really enjoyed your comcept of the restrictions city life might have on ones self. I thought the first postcard gave me that feeling of being trapped but it doesnt relate to the city so much for me. The photo in the second postcard illustrates an eerienes and lonliness that the night, city life can personally make me feel sometimes, so I appreciate that, but thought the text could have been a little better integrated. I love the fantasy world you have created in the third postcard. The atmosphere and overall look makes it somewhere I want to go and explore.

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  13. Hi, Sara. How are you? So hey, let's talk about the text one. I like it, you've used the lines that catch the eye on the road as a way to make emphasis on words. However, the top set of words gets lost in the colors and lights of the street. But with minimal work you've gotten your idea across effectively.

    The idea behind repetition is well displayed, but presentation wise it could use some work. It's mostly technical problems with it, but the cutting, cropping, scaling, and editing were handled very well. You could darken the character within the bars to make it appear more that he is trapped in there, his hands being the only light thing as they reach for freedom.

    The third one is a feast for the eyes. It's fun to see the different things you did for it. The stream is well done and looks like it was part of the road. The animals, especially the moose in the back, could have used some work on blending them in with the photo more. The moons seem to be placed rather absently, as though an after thought. Though, I still have a lot of fun looking at this piece.

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  14. I wasn't very clear what your big idea was at the very beginning but after you mentioned it was urbanization I had an "a ha" moment. Your first postcard I think is your strongest postcard. This idea of being trapped by your surroundings is one that I think people can resonate with. When I lived in Chicago everyone was topped on top of each other and no one knew anyone. There was a trapped feeling to it. With your second postcard I wish you would have used "skew" on your words to make them fit into the prospective of the image. You last postcard is very creative and wonderful to look at. It makes we want to live on that street. :) I like your use of Photoshop to make a street where anything can happen.

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  15. I wasn't sure what your "big idea" was when I first looked at all of your postcards. But then I had an "a ha" moment when you mentioned it was urbanization. I think your first postcard is the strongest one. For your second postcard I just wished you would have use "skew" to make the word follow the same perspective and the road. And I want to live on the street where your third postcard takes place.

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  16. in your animation i really really enjoy the idea of there being more out there in this world than what we as indeviduals think. it in many ways is similar to my animation idea. i thought the sketchyness of your animation was very unique and well done... for example the poverty slide and the war drawing amazed me. i think the music choice could may be switched up a lil bit but i like it alot over all

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  17. Your drawing style, and idea were very successful. I think the music will work well when you fix it not to loop. But overall, I think your style of gestural drawing worked well especially with your idea.

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  18. i really like the color you chose and the style of your animation. It's very sketchy and not clean and i love it. I got the big idea of looking deeper in themselves and focusing on more of who we are and relating to the outside world. The music choice was good, just as you mentioned it needs to be tweaked to fit the context more. The title page seems to fit in with the animation as well, especially the hint of color. 3.5 thumbs up!

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  19. I really enjoyed your art style in this animation. I think there needs to be more with your sound. Even if it only goes through once and doesn't repeat. I don't think the silence works very well for your piece... just talk to you about your sound. Now I want to watch it with the correct sound. Other than that I think it was really nicely done. 3 thumbs up for now... I think it would get a higher rating if the sound was there.

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  20. The first thought I had about your animation was how your drawing style and the word "membrane" are both fluid-like. How you drew really helped with your overall theme. For the big idea, I am unsure how the title related to the ideas that the character was thinking about. Maybe being unclear could be a good thing though, because it gives more room for interpretation.
    I think this video would be recommended for older students, because it moves so quickly and the big idea is a little more abstract.
    Overall I would give it a 3/4 just because the music needed to be fixed.
    :)

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  21. I am definitely drawn to your concept. I hate hearing people say they are bored. I think this concept could also work well in a classroom setting for older students. The "other topics" may be a little intense for a younger crowd. I definitely understood what your concept was as we watched your movie.
    As I said in class, I would rather comment on your piece after seeing it with the appropriate sound included. I think as is, the sound is too distracting.
    As is, I say 3 thumbs. Probably would be better with the sound fixed.

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  22. Sara,
    I thought your animation was really cool - your style and line quality were really interesting to me. I thought this also made a statement about the broader society, in that we would rather do nothing than think about the world's problems. I could really relate to this piece, and think it would be a good video to show in an older classroom someday. The only thing to be fixed is the music...great job!

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  23. Sara, Sara, Sara. How goes it?

    Okay getting this out of the way nice use of O Green World. Great Gorillaz song and very fitting for the project. Visually very well put together, I enjoy the style you used. The animation is a bit choppy but I think it works alright. Maybe a bit smoother movement on his... "Brain Hole Worm... Thing"... Not sure. The concept came across loud and clear in a very artistic and well thought out way. 3.25/4 thumbs!

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  24. i like how your concept is abstract. this would be very awesome to see the art that the students come up with. this is nice to show that art is more than just the basic medium like painting or ceramics. it is very broad and would be chanllenging to teach but if done right it would be very rewarding

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  25. Lesson Plan

    Good use of the word Jazz! Abstract is good, so are Jelly beans. Have you ever eaten a really great jelly bean, I have and it is fantastic! I like the break from reality filmography, reality is over done. Getting the chitlins to think abstractly will be your biggest challenge. Sketchbooks are made from paper and are good learnin' tools of inquiry for the kids.

    Making the children defend their work is interesting and very collegiate. I like your Artistic thinking, you think good.

    In all seriousness, this is a fantastic lesson plan...great job. Also in all seriousness, badgers are not to be messed with at all. KEEP AWAY FROM BADGERS!

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  26. your i movie turned out great sara! i loved how the abstraction makes me feel what you are saying in the voice overs.

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  27. I really like your lesson plan, and I think its strengths are that you are challenging students to be more conceptual than what I think the typical high school art project usually does. One weakness could be that because the conceptual part is pretty open and ambiguous, some students may want more structure. But now that I think about it that's not really a huge weakness, because you are challenging those students even more. Great job!

    Your iMovie project was really great now that I heard about your lesson plan, because I can see even more what you are wanting students to create. The tension in this piece was really effective. The only weakness I can say is that I couldn't hear the voice at all.

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  28. Lesson Plan:
    I feel as though your connection to the self and making it relevant to the students is really strong. I also like how you are trying to have the students make something more abstract. However, I am a little concerned that your position on what is or is not abstract are not very clear. I am not sure I completely understand, so I am not sure how your students will understand.

    iMovie:
    Your video is very heavy. I liked it a lot as far as concept goes. The biggest problem with your video is that we couldn't really hear what was being said. What I could hear was very interesting, though, and the problem could probably be fixed by turning up the volume. One part I really like was the points in the video with silence. I could definitely feel the tension. I am really glad you didn't have the waves or music. The voice over was really nice and helped with the mood. Overall, I like it a lot.

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  29. Your lesson plan is very thorough, well planned, and conceptually challenging.

    Your movie demonstrates clean editing skills and was a very interesting and inspiring film. I think the effect you had on the audience was very intense. We felt your need for air as you kept your face in the water. We were worried, yet calm. It suggested an abstract idea yet held my attention in a strange way. That idea sat with me, you related and portrayed tension and confusion, yet satisfaction. I really really enjoyed this excerpt. I want it on DVD. thanks.

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  30. hi sarah
    I really have no negative criticism for your lesson plan. It is very well put together and has a really intelligent concept, which is definitely your style. : p
    I LOVE your video. I couldn't really hear what you were saying through the teachers computer but I like the overall tone. I like how you compromised the tension of being underwater with the time constraints of the movie. I definitely got uncomfortable but the movie didn't need to be drawn out or over exaggerated. the editing is nice too ( :

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  31. iMovie

    LOVE THE MOVIE! Good work editing it all together, and the sound adds a nice bit to the project. The imagery is visually striking and beautifully shot. I have no negative critiques, I think it is perfect the way it is.

    Molecular geometry is also perfect, perfect in its precision and understanding of complex subject matter. The atoms are crazy, beware the atoms.

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  32. Your lesson plan was well thought out and a good idea of just focusing on the video camera itself. Also your movie was intense and definitely got me freaking out. I want you to liveee! Good job using the water "symbology" haha. I did read the book that you read from and it definitely makes sense! Good choice of background sound/music choices, etc.

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  33. Lesson Plan: I think it is great how you make the students think about other ways of creating feeling and emotion. I also like the openness to the project that allows students to strengthen their own creative style.

    Movie: There is a nice artistic style to you movie. You did a great job of invoking emotion through the action in your film.

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  34. HI! So that was tension-tastic! Doing this in two parts

    Lesson plan: You know what needs to be in more classrooms? More abstracted art. Seriously. When a student can understand how to be more abstract I think it helps their work in a good way. Also, video projects were always some of my favorite in class and I'd bet it'll get the creative gears turning in your students. I know abstraction is a bit difficult to grade in subjective art but your rubric is a bit broad. Other than that I'd gladly take on this lesson myself to do.

    iMvoie: GAH! Okay seriously that was very well done. The tension, the subject, the few and simple shots you use and yet how you use them. Very well done. I think you could have pulled a bit of an editing trick to make the breath holding a little longer, near inhuman levels, that would build the tension even further. However there is a fine line of disbelief that appears when that happens and I'm not sure where it would be. Awesome, though, really awesome.

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